Thursday, April 9, 2009

My Mother’s talents

..........My mother is a very gifted person. At first, she is a good cook. For example, she can cook Korean food, Western food and fusion food. Secondly, she plays the Jang-gu well, and she is a leader at the Jang-gu class. Finally, she can make any person like her. In several groups, she always draws people’s attention to her, so she led many groups. It is clear that she is a blessed woman.
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  1. KimApril 9, 2009 at 3:05 PM

    She sounds like a wonderful person! Here are some tips for your paragraph.

    1. First (not "At first")
    2. Second (not "Secondly")
    3. she teaches a Jang-gu class (not "leads")
    4. anyone (not "any person")
    5. When she's in a group, she is always the center of attention and ends up being the leader of the group.
    Nice CS!!

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  2. JUNG Sung JinApril 10, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    Hi, Kyungwoo.

    If your mon often make delicious food for you,
    your mom is more talanted and blessed person.
    And I'm sure you are the blessed person too.
    I think you are very positive person, So you will be important person in your department.

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  3. Hyun JimiApril 10, 2009 at 3:28 PM

    I envy you~!!you can eat delicious foods everyday because your mother can cook well ^^

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  4. JiseonApril 16, 2009 at 9:50 AM

    You are lucky! :)

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